Testing a good workflow for translating things into English on a quickie 4-panel.
Not sure I've gotten the best way down yet.
I just realized the arrangement of the speech bubbles need to be reversed for it to make sense, like the 3rd panel.
English is rather lacking in onomatopoeia compared to Japanese (or one could say Japanese is abnormally plentiful in it) so the sound effects are going to be a challenge as well.
Fara: Fox is completely right... Besides, I'm going to be the female lead in the next Starfox title... Miyu/Krystal: Like hell you are!
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English has more onomatopoeia than you could EVER shake a stick at. It's great because you can make up words that SOUND like sound effects. Remember old Batman tv-shows. They made up all sorts of words, like, "KABLOOIE!" Anyhow, instead of putting "Fay is scared", you could have ... *trembles* Where Krystal's eye turns black, you could have... *Twitch* like she's bottling her anger to remain composed at first.
If you need good words (or even fake ones that sound like something) just hit me up at KitKaramak@Gmail.com at any time
LOL some people, chicks or otherwise, are afraid of caddy women who quarrel. I like the fact that Krystal is composed throughout this piece, though... it makes it funnier.
Miyu/Krystal: Like hell you are!
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Kingdome Hearts is the most unimaginative peice of crap i've ever been tortured to see...
The ones simply translated from jap to english work pretty well too. They really sound like the . . . sound.
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This is one of the funniesat 4-panels I've read
Great job with the Character designs